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I'm generously excerpting this piece for you because it's behind the paywall of a professional publishing journal, and because I think it reveals just what a fraught, uncertain, unregulated, dangerous place the work of writing and publishing has arrived at.
Full credit to Erin Somers, and link is here: lunch.publishersmarketplace.com/2026/07/seven-figure-book-deal-cancelled-over-ai-suspicions-raise...
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Seven-Figure Book Deal Cancelled Over AI Suspicions Raises Questions About AI Guardrails
By Erin Somers
A debut thriller won by Minotaur in a seven-figure, two-book deal after a reported 14-way auction was withdrawn by its agents this week for suspected use of AI. The novel, whose title and author PL is withholding for the author's privacy, sold for an alleged $2.5 million or thereabouts. But rumors surfaced quickly from people who had read the manuscript that the book contained many of the hallmarks of AI, including negative parallelism, off-kilter metaphors, and a flat prose style. On Wednesday, the author's co-agents Marc Gerald and Ashley Coleman at Europa Content withdrew the book, after questioning the author about the validity of the rumors.
St. Martin's Publishing Group would not confirm the size of the deal, telling Publishers Lunch only, "Macmillan Publishers participated in an auction. The agent ultimately pulled the book."
Europa wrote in a statement that the author, "Produced an incredible manuscript that dazzled us and the top publishing professionals around the world."
[Inserts question: How did the off-kilter metaphors and flat prose style dazzle all those top publishing professionals? But I digress. The report continues:]
"Unfortunately, we are no longer able to authenticate how the manuscript fully evolved from origin to completion. During the submission process we vetted the manuscript... and felt trusting in [the author's] reassurance that it was written without utilizing AI as a resource in the writing or editorial process. We can no longer substantiate that, and we are withdrawing the book. This raises so many questions about authorship and what AI means for this industry but those are questions for another day. We regret that our enthusiasm led to this outcome and we apologize to our publishing partners."
Gerald further explained to PL that AI suspicions were first raised during the submission process by an editor who had read the manuscript: "We immediately had a very long, substantive call with [the author], about AI protocol and the consequences for both him and Europa if he was using it. We went through detailed sections of his book, where he shared with us that like many authors he used AI for research into chemistry which forms the background for much of the book. That said, he confirmed he wrote the book 100 percent himself. At no point did we run an AI detection on the MS; we had concerns that the software had lead to previous inaccuracies."
The author denied using AI to PL, writing, "The rumors are absurd." But this week, Gerald and Coleman spoke to the author again and told the Bookseller that "aspects of [the author’s] story changed."
Gerald wrote to PL: "On Wednesday, Ashley and I decided we had no choice but to pull the book after we weren’t able to confirm for ourselves that AI had only been used for light research, grammar checking and Americanizing the language. While we are not able to say authoritatively whether or not he used AI, we did have trouble validating how the work went from creation to polished draft. Ultimately, trust between an agent and client is everything - especially given the fact that AI detection software is still in its infancy."
An analysis by Pangram 4, the leading AI detection program, returned an assessment of 97% AI...But there has been a backlash to Pangram and competing programs, which some people dismiss as inaccurate. Reported individual tests of other material on previous versions have shown more idiosyncratic results and people have challenged the company's claims. Chakrabarty said, "There are little false positives here and there. And there is some acceptable margin of error. For instance if it says an article is 80-90% human you can assume that its predominantly human with some AI edits etc which is totally fine and not egregious. But when an 80K word + novel say it's 97% AI generated it's very hard to deny it." He added that AI hallmarks that editors can look for include: plot inconsistency, too many mixed metaphor cliches, too much negative parallelism, and rule of triad, or excessive groupings of three...
Some authors will use generative AI to "edit" rather than write, without necessarily realizing the extent to which the software will change text unless blocked by specific prompts. Chakrabarty notes, "It rewrites everything and changes a writer's voice. As Hemingway said, Writing is Rewriting. If ChatGPT does edit it's still AI writing."
Sources tell PL that more deals are being cancelled behind the scenes following the discovery or suspicion of AI -- one publisher noted that multiples imprint have had to cancel a book over this -- including books that originate in the self-publishing sphere and are then picked up by Big Five publishers. This usually happens quietly and under the public radar, and is only brought to light by fans online...
In addition to issues in traditional publishing, AI-generated books are now flooding the self-publishing market, cutting into the livelihoods of human authors. Chakrabarty recently led a study investigating the amount of AI in self-published KDP genre fiction, finding "our results bear directly on the market-effect question at the center of the fair use defense to copyright infringement."
...The authors concluded, "Generative AI can...reshape a creative market through scale rather than quality.... We call this dilution." They note, "Our findings reveal a market remade by scale. Books with substantial AI text enter the catalog far faster than the revenue available to absorb them, push down the return each title earns, and contest the top ranks, while the books with AI text that succeed draw most heavily on the distinctive language of existing books."
In their piece on the new research study, the NYT wrote, "The researchers used Pangram to analyze text from around 60,000 books sold on Amazon. From that sample, about 53 percent of the books published in 2025 contained A.I.-generated text, compared to 23 percent in 2023."
In another small but positive development, ChatGPT has stopped fulfilling prompts to generate text in the style of a specific writer. Ars Technica writes, "In refusing to directly copy the 'exact style' of various authors, ChatGPT offered instead to capture an overall 'feeling' by incorporating some of the common features found in those authors’ work."
Still, the vetting tools remain imperfect, and questions abound. The author of the withdrawn book told PL, "Writers are increasingly being made to second-guess ordinary stylistic choices because they might be labelled as signs of AI. Even em dashes are now treated with suspicion, which makes me wonder what people would say about Emily Dickinson’s writing today."
It's clear that this is a watershed moment in publishing and agents, editors, and authors will continue to flounder without firm procedures in place. The core problem remains: there is no way to tell for sure.
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I don't have any wise words of summary, just a lingering sense of dread. ... See MoreSee Less
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A debut thriller won by Minotaur in a seven-figure, two-book deal after a reported 14-way auction was withdrawn by its agents this week for suspected use of AI. The novel, whose title and author PL is withholding for the author’s privacy, sold for an alleged $2.5 million or thereabouts. But rumors...23 hours ago
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And another question: how in the world is anybody getting a seven-figure book deal these days???
This sounds a bit like when they put the book Frankenstein through the AI detector and it said 97% AI...
It was only a matter of time before someone was bold enough to test the waters.
"[W]e had concerns that the software had lead to previous inaccuracies." Did Gerald, who is being quoted, make this error or did the author or is it AI?
one of my favorite "tells" for something written by ai is when a sentence says something like: "he answered in four words," and then gives you a sentence with more than 4 words. A lot of the "heartwarming stories" flooding FB these days are ai-slop. But to the article... I have no idea what negative parallelism is, nor the triad thing they mention. Possibly because I'm not strictly a fiction writer, or maybe because I didn't study writing in college? I've used em-dashes for over fifty years, and am not about to stop using them. But I was pondering recently how to prove I wrote something, if I were ever challenged, and realized there's probably no definitive way. I tend to write long-hand first, and then type it in, but I usually toss the written pages afterwards. Even if I kept them as proof, someone could say I had ai write it first, and then copied it in my own handwriting. My next (nonfiction) book has been in progress for over ten years, but would those old computer files be considered proof, or could someone say I faked the file dates? I'm with Susan - definitely a sense of dread.
I'm glad this is being brought to light. I love supporting independent authors, and it really bothers me knowing that some are using AI. My guess is this book is probably in the romantasy genre, which is why someone was so amped to snap it up. It's really popular right now.
I also will not give up my usage of the em dash.
ok but who is "Chakrabarty"? I'm looking for where they are named and identified, but they seem to just suddenly appear in the article?
When I write I avoid dashes and struggle when I come up with an excellent set of three in parallel. Three is still perfectly appealing to human sensibilities, but AI leans on it so heavily that it has become a tell. Alliteration and assonance, which are exceedingly fun for me, are now a worry. AI writing often takes the grammar dress-ups to an extreme, but if I come across a touch bland and maybe use too general language (dry) it can be completely dismissed with that accusation. What if I look too AI? How do we fight it? And how will writing change as authors find ways to avoid the symptoms that are common in AI writing? Will AI adjust to keep up? Will publishers continue trying to police it? Or are we seeing the end of that in fiction? Consider how many AI-written books are already being published. However poor they are, they still sell. I am horrified at the idea of AI writing nonfiction. We are giving up so much! But fiction? Shakespeare didn’t write Henry VIII alone. While we don’t allow the use of other writers’ works today in that way, AI isn’t a person. I think this will slide away the same as many machine-made items became more acceptable years after they replaced handmade as the cheapest option. It sounds like a brave new world… but not in Shakespeare’s sense.
Here's my litmus test - did you enjoy it? Then stop complaining. Did you not enjoy it? Then you don't have to read it again.
I feel dread and sadness that I have to edit my own editing so as to avoid the appearance of AI. And I love em dashes. But I agree that there are a lot of “tells” in AI generated writing, and it shows up in the darndest places these days.
How were all these people dazzled by this manuscript to the point of paying that much money for it? I've read a fair bit of AI fiction this summer while we're off school just to see what it can do, and it's almost never good.
I'm not teaching in public school anymore, but I'm hearing more and more about students in high school and college trying to use AI for papers and school assignments. Good grief! A government official from this country at an international conference tried to pass off an AI map of Africa, with gross errors, as actual. It was mentioned in Heather Cox-Richardson's posting last night. The fact that people in positions of power think that use of AI is acceptable is crazy, and relying on AI for fact is outrageous.
Ooof. I hate this so much. As someone who published one teen novel with a small publisher and earned $58, I feel like I can't compete with the robots - or even prove I'm human.
Ugh
The dread every honest student feels submitting an assignment these days...will it get flagged for AI, and have I done everything I can to sufficiently prove the work is my own? It's chaos out there.
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Soooo, no one in the larger publishing companies actually read the final manuscript? Nor did they run it through a basic AI detector like college professors do for assignments. Wild. I can see this happening for self-published books.
Finally got around to watching Disclosure Day, and that's 2 1/2 hours of my life that I'll never get back. What a turkey. ... See MoreSee Less
3 days ago
Oh really? Do you not care for sci-fi, or was it just poorly produced? I was thinking about seeing that one. I got talked into seeing The Backrooms because my teen son creates sci-fi horror animated stories. It was incredibly disturbing and my Fitbit showed my heart beat at 30 higher 🤣
DEFINITELY see Hadestown (film version out now). I'm not a person naturally inclined to Greek mythology, but this is the kind of presentation that converts people like me! The music/ acting/ dialogue/ costumes/ compelling story line were ON point!! Definitely best musical I've ever seen...
Is this the movie that is supposed to make people stop believing in God?
😂 You seen The Odessy yet?
I have been listening to your History of the World Series currently finishing up the Middle ages. It should be retitled royals behaving badly. The next book is about the Renaissance. After that how are you addressing the modern era
We laughed out loud at the dialogue and pacing and the very dramatic music. At the end…..I was really hoping for a certain other Spielberg character to be part of the big reveal, if you understand! 😂😂 would have been amazing. Two good things from this movie though: Emily Blunt’s acting and the trailer was actually a masterpiece. It really made me want to see it! 😝
That’s all I needed to read.
The only thing that made up for the time wasted was watching the hilarious roasting reviews we watched afterward. youtu.be/kebERTQzOng?si=O2-GwcZzlOi-5SS-
I don’t know, I enjoyed it. To each their own.
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When you find yourself laughing during scenes that aren't supposed to be funny, you know there's a problem. This movie appeared to be stuck in a very bad time warp.
Yep. The only good scenes are at the beginning with Emily Blunt and then it’s downhill from there lol
I thought EXACTLY the same thing.
We said the same thing 🙄
Me too- Emily Blunt was amazing- but such weird editing choices and super cheesy flat ending.
Exactly! It's definitely no ET or Close Encounters.
Well, Spielberg hasn’t made a good film for the past two decades so that’s not a surprise.
Susan, as one who has followed what's really going on behind the scenes with government disclosure, I can say that the movies main points are accurate. Spielberg's movie is part of a plan that has been said in motion ever since the Biden administration to bring gradual disclosure to the key facts. What has come out is that we are not alone. The US has engaged in a 70-year cover-up of a crash retrieval program and reverse engineering program of alien technology. The information and the programs connected to the legacy reverse engineering program do not come under direct control of the US Congress which is why Congress has gotten so involved in trying to bring disclosure over the last 3 years.. My question to you, given your opinion of the movie is, how much have you studied the subject, the phenomenon, what the government has already disclosed, and what the witnesses before Congress in open hearings and others have said? I am deeply concerned that Christians have their head in the sand on this issue rather than face the profound questions that disclosure forces upon us.
Sometimes the quiet spaces between moments hold more meaning than the moments themselves. Even a disappointing watch leaves room for softer light to fill the edges of the day.
Agreed! What a mess of a boring stinker.
LOOK HOW HANDSOME HE IS!
I got to ride three-year-old Tuck for the first time this week. He's sweet, willing, forward, and very sensitive. Pure gaits and a lovely attitude. We're going to have so much fun together.
Tuck is a draft-Oldenberg cross, half-sibling to my black-and-white full draft mare Noel and my red-and-white draft-Hanoverian mare Firefly. They all share the same mother, North American Spotted Draft broodmare Cheyenne.
If you don't follow our Peace Hill Farm account (and you should!), you may have missed our Firefly update. So here it is:
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We know we have lots of Firefly fans out there. (She's our ridiculously friendly and VERY food focused red and white Hanoverian-Draft cross mare. If you've ever camped on or toured the farm, Firefly has tried to raid your pockets for treats.)
Well, Firefly had a pasture mishap (she was probably kicking her little brother Tuck) and suffered a partial tear to her left hind suspensory ligament. This happens, and it will heal, but it's a 9-12 month recovery period, so we took Firefly north to Select Breeder Services in Chesapeake City, Maryland, to be evaluated as a breeding prospect. Because we love Firefly, and we'd love to have a Firefly second generation baby.
Turns out that Firefly is quite unusual.
Routine testing before breeding turned up the information that she is, actually, chromosomally male. She should have been a colt, but the "master switch" that signals a baby horse fetus to develop male characteristics never kicked in. So she's got female characteristics, but...she's genetically a guy.
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I'm pretty sure this accounts for the fact that Firefly has always been QUITE DIFFICULT to train in the dressage ring. However, on the vet's advice, she's had hormone therapy and is now successfully carrying a donor embryo (Arabian-warmblood cross!). There is at least a chance that this will improve her attitude. But I will keep you posted. In the meantime, everyone on the farm is getting a kick out of using they/them pronouns for Firefly. (NO culture war furies, please. This is certainly a case where indeterminate pronouns are warranted. They're a HORSE and won't be invading anyone's single-sex bathroom. Unless there are treats in there, of course.)
I'm just counting on the fact that Tuck is going to be a little less complicated... ... See MoreSee Less
2 weeks ago
As a fellow homeschooler and equestrian, I love reading about your horse adventures!
Am I the only one who is a huge Firefly the tv show fan who got very confused for a moment?
Wow, what a surprise! Does she lack testosterone receptors or testosterone production?
Yay for science! Biology is so messy, it's amazing really.
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